This latter option can be helpful for students who are traveling during the summer months or have particularly busy schedules in the fall. She will offer high level thoughts and comments on the content and recommend revisions to improve the essays. I spent most of my time on the internet watching youtubes, browsing forums, so my life is not that interesting to write about With her help, I was able to fully express my ideas on the page and show my personality through the limited amount of words allowed for my essays. I found Nelsie extremely easy to work with.
She will offer high level thoughts and comments on the content and recommend revisions to improve the essays.
Style counts. I force them to think - and sometimes realize that I'm the first person who has asked this of them. I was able to drastically improve my Stanford application in a matter of 5 hours! There's no set formula for writing a great essay because the best essays are as unique as the individuals who write them. You are sharp and smart and the best wordsmith I've ever met. Laura helps facilitate this process by meeting with students, getting to know them, and helping them to reflect upon their backgrounds and accomplishments and clearly articulate their interests and goals.
Her help was invaluable. I would like to highlight the support piece as I think both P and I derived significant comfort from having an outside, very experienced advisor to turn to.
The Evaluation: Once you have a draft of your essay, your coach spends one hour evaluating it on his or her own, making careful notes and preparing for your consultation.
Working with you made an often intimidating process one that she engaged with enthusiasm. Five hours was a really good amount. For others, who might have eight or ten essays, there might not be a teacher available.
Molly was patient and thoughtful, as well as fun to work with. I am pleased to say that on December 15th my son was accepted at his first choice school as well as his second and third choices.